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Wednesday 30 June 2010

Narrative written by Danielle

http://www.yannielectric.com/img/house_fire.jpg
Once upon a time in a beautiful house there lived a mother named Sarina and a little girl named Christall.

One day Christall was bored so she started to play with a lighter. Then Christall saw a fire. She shouted: “Fire, fire, fire.’’ Christall went to the mailbox. She saw her mum there.

Mum dialled 111. The fire fighters came and put the fire out. They were safe and lived happily ever after.
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4 comments:

  1. Plessius family1 July 2010 at 12:51

    Hi Danielle,
    I liked the way you set your story out in a logical order.
    Karl's mum

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  2. Nelya room22 July 2010 at 09:57

    Hi there Danielle!
    I think that you have very good writing skills and i enjoyed reading your story about the beautiful house.
    Keep going hard on what you want to achieve!
    Nelya room 2
    TAMAKI INTERMEDIATE

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  3. Tatiana4 July 2010 at 01:11

    Hey Danielle,

    I really like the beginning and end of your story.I like how your picture stands out.

    Tatiana r7

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  4. Danielle mailata30 August 2010 at 09:44

    Hi Danielle
    What a good story you wrote your story really entertand me I like the picture that you choose
    From Danielle p.s Keep on doing storys.

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