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Friday 23 April 2010

Our school makeover

This is recount of what Joan thought about the Glenbrae School Makeover.
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9 comments:

  1. alex26 April 2010 at 10:07

    i liked your story it was cool.

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  2. Gemima26 April 2010 at 10:09

    Hi Joan

    Your recount on your story about the holiday's was intersting. I hope you write another in ter sing story next time.

    Excellent Work!

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  3. moli27 April 2010 at 10:08

    hi joan I like your holiday about the jumping castal



    by moli.

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  4. apii28 April 2010 at 09:27

    hi Joan I like your story about your holidays it was intersting Excellent work

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  5. Layla28 April 2010 at 09:33

    Hi joan i liked how you speak and it was intersting and Excellent about the bounce castle.


    By Layla

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  6. june28 April 2010 at 09:39

    hi joan
    it was nice to see how your holidays were

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  7. Gemima12 May 2010 at 09:53

    Hi Joan

    I really liked your recount about your holidays

    From your best friend Gemima.A

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  8. nunia20 May 2010 at 10:00

    Hi joan I like your recount about your holidays really enjoyed it was cool
    by nunia

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  9. Layla30 August 2010 at 09:18

    hey! Joan! i liked your voice

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