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Tuesday 16 February 2010

Recount of Joan's holiday

In the holiday I went to the pools. It was cool because I went on the hydro slide.

It was exciting. Then I went on the
bumper cars. I came second. Then we went to have lunch.


We had Mc Donald’s. Next we went to Sylvia Park to get some new clothes. I enjoyed my holiday and can't wait for the next one.
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2 comments:

  1. Hina17 February 2010 at 18:49

    I think it is a nice story Joan. Well done.

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  2. june12 May 2010 at 09:53

    hi joan were they real bumper cars or just donuts.

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