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Friday 1 May 2009

Tatiana's recount


This is a recount about what Tatiana did during her school holidays. She went to the pools.

14 comments:

  1. Hi Tatiana, I am so pleased to see you back on this blog sharing your lovely writing. I don't think I have seen you since last year, and I do think that your reading is already much better! Keep up the good writing and I will be looking out for it.
    Mrs Burt

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  2. Well done Tatiana. Your recount gave me all the information I needed to learn about your fun holiday. I think you used expression well when you read your recount. I'm looking forward to listening to you reading your myth later in the term.
    Mrs Boyer

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  3. Kia ora,Tatiana
    I'm glad you enjoyed your holiday so much.
    Your reading is very clear and fluent. Well done!

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  4. Hi Tatiana!I liked your story. I loved your clear voice too.


    From Gloria

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  5. Hi Tatiana

    that was a really good recount I hoped you had a wonderful time there.


    From June

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  6. glad YOU ENJOYed your holidays

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  7. Hi Tatiana,

    How are you?
    You read your recount clearly and loudly. I also liked how you gave eye contact to the camera.
    I like going to the Panmure Pools too. I try and do 20 lengths freestyle in the inside pool and then relax in the spa pool. It's a great place to visit. Keep up the great work.

    From, Miss Paton

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  8. hi tatiana

    your recount is lovey



    from sariah

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  9. Hi TATIANA , your recount was fantastic you are very intalligent and going to the Panmure pools sounds like you had fun. From KEREN.

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  10. Hi TATIANA , your recount was fantastic you are very intalligent and going to the Panmure pools sounds like you had fun. From KEREN.

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  11. Hi Tatiana I really like your Movie about the holiday what did you do at the swimming pool from Asena

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  12. Your voice is clear and your words are well annunciated. Well done. Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Golder

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  13. Wow, Tatiana, it sounds like you had a really fun holiday! I liked the expression you used in your voice--it made me wish I had been there too!
    Look forward to hearing more of your adventures.
    Ms George

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  14. Hi Tatiana'
    I really enjoyed the way you spoke so clearly and expressively about your holiday. You also concluded your account effectively.
    Marja Pole

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