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Wednesday, 4 March 2009

Hola's adventure at the beach



Hola had a lovely time collecting pipis at the beach. Click on the "play" button to hear more about his beach adventure.

It would be great if you commented on his story.

6 comments:

  1. Hi Hola

    Well done for reading your beach adventure in a clear voice. I understood every word. The water going into your mouth must have tasted very salty.

    Keep up the great recount writing. Look forward to hearing more of your adventures.

    From,
    Miss Paton

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  2. Well done! I enjoyed listening to you speaking. I thought that was a good recount too.

    From,
    Mrs She Pt England School

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  3. Hi Hola
    It's Silas here from Pt England (I was at Glenbrae before). That was good writing, I like going to the beach too.
    Silas

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  4. Hi Hola how are you can you, tell room9 and room8 that I miss them and you too. Lots of love from silas I Hope you Have A good Day

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  5. Hi Hola, you sounded like you had fun. by samuel.

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  6. Hi Hola I liked your story about the beach was it cold when you had a swim? I hope you go again to the beach.es

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