You spoke clearly and loudly. You sequenced your recount correctly. I bet it was fun doing all those races. I look forward to hearing more of your recounts.
Hi Johnathan Another person who loved the dolphin dives. I think it is great to have a swimming pool at your school. It is a long time since I have taught at a school with its own pool. You are very lucky to have it.
Hi Johnathan,
ReplyDeleteYou spoke clearly and loudly. You sequenced your recount correctly. I bet it was fun doing all those races. I look forward to hearing more of your recounts.
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Miss Paton
Hi Johnathan
ReplyDeleteI liked how you spoke clearly
and I liked how you took part in the race.
From Litani
Hi Johnathan
ReplyDeleteI like the way you spoke and clealy
but you need to use expression.
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Myo Htat and Luana.
Hi Johnathan
ReplyDeleteAnother person who loved the dolphin dives. I think it is great to have a swimming pool at your school. It is a long time since I have taught at a school with its own pool. You are very lucky to have it.
Thank you Mrs Burt for sending me a comment and I am lucky to have a swimming pool at glenbrae school.
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